Chapter 1 is finally done.

Well, not too bad really: I had hoped to finish this about month or two ago, but considering I had my original domain ripped out from under me along with other unexpected events (more pleasant, like my going to San Diego) I can live with it.

27 pages of mistakes. Or, really, experimentation. Now I will decide what succeed and what failed.

As I hinted at before, it will be about two to three weeks before I begin Chapter 2. I will be using the time in between to do prep work for the next chapter. In the way of writing this will include finalizing the script for 2, flesh out the script for 3 and frame out the script for 4. I also intend to do prep sketches and some art and coloring exploration before I begin drawing Chapter 2. I’m also going to work over Jennworks as a whole, evaluate the navigation and update things such as my links.

To this end, I’m making a request for any and all feedback and criticism from anyone who is willing to give it (go to town, Barry) This includes Dicebox as well as the website. I’m looking for comments on things like readability, ease of use, mistakes, things you feel should be included or excluded. The art of the Chapter 1 is fair game as well—I plan to adjust the whole damn thing as I might change my coloring style slightly. But I won’t start on that until I am nearly done with Chapter 2.

If you do chose to comment on readability or code issues, please let me know what operating system, browser and screen resolution you are working with. As soon as you could would be fantastic as I hope to start revamping the site with in a week.

Things that will be updating until Chapter 2 gets rolling will be my journal on the main Jennworks page as well as the beginning of the art section. I also will start a short comics piece that hopefully will be complete by the time I start the next Chapter. I probably won’t do a process page just yet as I am about to do an exploration into said process.