Not woman enough for you, ’ey?

Not too long ago I received an email from someone complaining that
Griffen “looks like a man.” Like so:

The author went on to express their aggravation with this state of
affairs: clearly I was capable of rendering the expected womanly
form. They suggested I seriously revise Griffen’s look.

Well, I was a bit flummoxed, so I sent out an email to some cohorts,
including my esteemed editor, outlining the dilemma and some possible
responses on my part. Much to my delight, Erika Moen leapt into
action and sent me this possible redesign for Ms. Stoyka:

Perhaps a name change is also in order: Chiffon, maybe?

Cross posted at the Dicebox Forum.

ADDITIONAL

Bill Mudron has offered up his own interpretation of Griffen Medea.

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